The feedback I got was relatively good, but the criticism they made was there was too much type in the book. The main aim of the guide was to inform, and I feel as though fewer pages will incite people to read it through. I agree with what they say to an extent, and I need to consider use of colour and shade to make it easier on the eye.
Also, the envelope was way too small, so I will alter this by 20mm or so to fit all the content in comfortably. I think the parcel paper worked well, but I may use other stock for the book as it looks as disposable as the packaging.
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