Saturday, 21 May 2011

Final Crit - Problems

The feedback I got was relatively good, but the criticism they made was there was too much type in the book.  The main aim of the guide was to inform, and I feel as though fewer pages will incite people to read it through.  I agree with what they say to an extent, and I need to consider use of colour and shade to make it easier on the eye.

Also, the envelope was way too small, so I will alter this by 20mm or so to fit all the content in comfortably.  I think the parcel paper worked well, but I may use other stock for the book as it looks as disposable as the packaging.





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