Friday, 9 December 2011

Feedback From the First Crit




Overall, the feedback I got from Yafet and Ben were good.  Both of them recognised what was going on and didn't have much trouble understanding the concept of speed with my timestamps.  I covered up the annotations at the side for the purposes of the crit.

Considerations
Disperse 1:  Colour to the 'r' could give emphasis before exploding into the screen.
Drop 1:  It could read better in the end, as in falling in the correct order.
Drop 2:  They could drop out of the frame as they keel over, giving another relation to my theme.
Drop 3: The stem of the 'd' could stretch before it drops, and the letters could fall out of the frame.

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